Alec Laine

Well, I know each guy is different and I'd like different answers to make up my character. 1. How would you react if your crush talks to you? 2.How would ...

But like everything else some stuff was meant to fail. I would change "stuff was" to "things were", it would sound more dramatic. Every scientist was assigned a part of ...

Thanks. I am an Australian and we spell realised with an "s" but it can be spelled both ways. I will try to write more and yes, I did repeat ...

"Zombie" by The Cranberries. NEW TOPIC: Beautiful things in nature.

So do tell us more about yourself. What genre is your favorite? Do you like poetry or fiction? What author would you like to meet the most and why? Who ...

It was as if the heavens just opened up and let all the tears I'd been holding back fall down There was an "as" missing. (boy, that sounds wrong when ...

Jens leapt over Vader with agility, pushing the dust into the air and with a scream focused on his opponent. It was as if there was nothing else but he ...

I found the plot line very interesting. The conversation seemed a little stiff at first, but as you let us [the readers] glimps into the personallty of the characters I ...

Finally, a silvery fish hangs bouncing on the line. The old man drops the rod and snatches at his chest. His eyes are still wide, and he coughs again. Down ...

I really liked how you described the crying. Tears were still trickling down my face, when my mom opened her mouth and questioned “ sweetheart, what did you just say? ...

absolutely brilliant, this is the first comment I give to a writer here on YWS. the way you've composed it is absolutely awe-inspiring. I was deeply touched, and strongly suggest ...

"‘Reincarnation, literally 'to be made flesh again', is a doctrine or metaphysical belief that some essential part of a living being (in some variations only human beings) survives death to ...

Hello everyone! My name is Alec Laine. I'm so happy I found this site, I desperately need critique for the novel I'm working on. This seems like a really nice ...